Wednesday, 17 February 2016

10 Word Stories

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Read & write some stories that only use 10 words to tell a story...

59 comments:

  1. BANG!The engine exploded.Smoke billowing everywhere.NO!I need help!

    BY BJ and Oliver

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  2. BANG!The engine exploded.Smoke billowing everywhere.NO!I need help!

    BY BJ and Oliver

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  3. When all was dark, you were the ray of sunlight

    Snigdha Rm20

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  4. You and me, on the sea, in our little boat

    Snigdha Rm20

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  5. Waving goodbye his footsteps echoed, gradually quietening. Then loneliness came.

    Miss C rm 15

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  6. Broken branches. Torn clothes. I was running out of time.

    Miss C rm 15

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  7. Girl eats curds and whey. Sees spider. Jumps in fright.

    Weasel, Room 15

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  8. He moaned, blood gushing from where the lead had struck.

    Sam rm 15

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  10. Her pillow was covered in tears, her face smudged with sadness.

    Gabby, Room 16

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    1. Gabby, I love your image of the face being smudged with sadness. Great use of alliteration!

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  11. Lady's scream tears the night. Baby falls into her arms.

    Qais, Room 15

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  12. Fire. Blood. Explosions. The ruins of the village were unbearable.

    Sam, Room 15

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  13. Going any further would put everything in jeopardy forever.

    Ngahau, Room 15

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  14. Too much knowledge! My brain's mutating, and I know everything!!?!

    Shakeel and Jaevyn, Room 16

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  15. Explosions smashing, gunfire, flames flew up into the night sky.

    Jaden, Room 15

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  16. Waves of the ocean crash apon the lovely golden sand.

    Dominique room15

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  17. He knew the truth about the box but he didn't.

    Isabelle Room 15

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  18. Explosions smashing, gunfire, flames flew up into the night sky.

    Jaden, Room 15

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  19. A tear slipped down my cheek. She was my everything...

    Zelda, room 15

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  20. He knew the truth about the box but he didn't.

    Isabelle Room 15

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  21. You turned the page when I was still reading it!

    Annamie and Maya, room 16

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  22. Shining moon was the only light hovering between the shadows.

    Ellie, Room 16

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  23. Sprinting across road. Car comes from nowhere, fountain of blood...

    -Stanley ._.

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  24. Story 1 - Drop dead gorgeous, I fell for her over a photo.

    Story 2 - She walked the line into the bliss of pure insanity.

    Sylvie, room 16

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  25. Explosions, smashing, gun fire, flames flew up into the full moon.

    Jaden, Room 15.

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  26. Fire, blood, explosions, the remains of the village were tragic.

    Sam, Room 15.

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  27. Car flies from nowhere, yellow blood spurting from bisected carcass...
    -Stanley ._.

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  28. Striking the ball with a lightning kick. What a goal!!!

    Saa, Room 15.

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  31. She fell. She crashed. Then, her heart just stopped. Dead.

    Zoe, Room 16.

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  32. The explosions penetrated the castle, the people's screams grew louder.

    Serin, Room 16.

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  33. As the nuke deployed it leaked oil and caught fire

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  34. Story 1 - My adventures began as the waves unforgivingly crashed over me.

    Story 2 - Crabs lurking in the seaweed. Starfish staring at me.

    Story 3 - From behind the rocks they emerge as the sun settles.

    Annabel and Olivia, Room 15/16

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  35. Nobody knows it, but it's earth's final seconds before destruction.

    Shakeel & Jaevyn, Room 16.

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  36. Going any further would put everything in jeopardy for all humanity.

    Jack & Ngahau, Room 15.

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  37. Her family glared at me, like it was my fault.

    Zelda, Room 15.

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    1. This would be a cool story starter, Zelda!

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  38. Hunters marched into the forest and trapped the fleeing animals.

    Julia and Olive, Room 15.

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  39. The clock strikes midnight and I run for my life.

    Audree, Room 15.

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  40. As the tsunami approached, people lost all hope for superman

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  41. The hot gleaming sun sparkled on the fresh lake water.

    Tamlyn, Room 16.

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  42. Story 1 - A flat tone replaced her heartbeat monitor's steady beating beep.

    Story 2 -A scream erupted from her mouth as the arrow entered.

    Story 3 - Their lips touched just as the church erupted in flame.

    Story 4 - An arc of colour curved across the raining dismal sky.

    Katie, Room 15

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    1. YOur 10 words tell a story but then it leaves me wanting to know more - who was kissing? Whay was the church on fire? What caused the arc of colour in the sky? These would all make amazing story starters!

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  43. Her screams filled the air as the man grabbed her.

    His scream ripped through the silent night as he fell.

    As the baby fell, woman's screams tore through the town.

    As they dashed through the undergrowth, branches lashed out fiercely.

    Arden, Room 15.

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  44. My eyes shut as the knife went through the ham. YUM.

    Monica, Room 15.

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  45. Abhorrent darkness blankets the earth as her breath became fog.

    Sophie, Room 16.

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  46. Story 1 - Pushing my heavy feet towards the exit, finally I'm free.

    Story 2 - Waking up drenched in warm sweat, I was only dreaming.

    Bri, Room 16

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  47. Heavy knees sank to wooden floor like a heavy wooden bar.

    Jordan, room 15

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  48. Story 1 - He limped towards the accident, but it was too late.

    Story 2 - You ended my life while I was still living it.

    Lucy, Room 15

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  49. The shadows overtook me as I let go of hope.

    All that was left was pain, all else was gone.

    I closed my eyes, hoping everything else would go away.

    Life leaked out of me as I shut my eyes

    All my hope scattered as I saw the little girl

    Hana and Bella, Room 16.

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  50. Waves crashing as the water rises. Salt fills the air.

    Harriet, room 15

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  51. And just like that, my whole life was a dream.

    Annamie and Maya, Room 16.

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    1. Imagine that! Makes me wonder what the real life was like!

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  52. Liam And Warrior4 March 2016 at 11:38

    the wind blew, sand flew, the dessert road never ends.

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  53. Story 1 - Ash black as death itself smothers the air. Stealthy. Deadly.

    Story 2 - Velvet curtains of darkness fall, defeating the warmth of daylight.

    Story 3 - The blade struck as I realised words can kill. Brutally.

    Niamh, Room 15

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    1. Very vivid images, Niamh...and clever use of short sentences.

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  54. 1 - The jagged lightening flashed as she gripped the door handle.

    2 - Earth was rotating innocently, the asteroid hurtling towards it's target.

    3 - The rabbit's mangled body hung limp in the fox's jaws.

    4 - A doe ambled through the debris, searching for her fawn.

    Megan, Room 15

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