Wednesday, 17 February 2016

Metaphors and Similes

Metaphors and similes are such
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 to use to add some more detail to your writing!

Read & write some below...

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  1. Fitness is like a ball flying around with energy.
    It is a powerful cheetah, sprinting down the flaming desert.

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  2. Happiness is a bed of flowers in a long lost meadow.
    Happiness is a completed piece of artwork hanging on plain white wall.
    Life is a mystery book changing from one thrilling chapter to another.

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  3. The hot boulder was a sizzling pan for my wet back

    Snigdha Rm20

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  4. The rocks under my numb feet shone like chunks of gold

    Snigdha Rm20

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  5. A happy life is a mysterious book.
    No one knows what will happen, until the end.

    Min-Sung Rm20

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  6. A happy life is a mysterious book.
    No one knows what will happen, until the end.

    Min-Sung Rm20

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  7. Antarctica is an icy land hanging on to the bottom of the Earth.
    The giant mountains and plain grounds are covered in snow.
    The stormy wind moves the cold snow around.
    The animals of Antarctica are used to being cold so they can stay up in the icy storms.

    Min-Sung Rm20

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  8. Ed: You always wanted calm seas, but I was your Tsunami!

    Jacob: You were my cup-pa tea, but now I drink coffee!

    Jacob & Ed ,Room 16

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  9. You wanted calm seas, but I was always your tsunami.

    You were my cup-pa tea, but now I drink coffee.

    Jacob and Ed, Room 16

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  10. The calm blue sea surrounding the island is a place in heaven. The sand slowly slopes out to the multi-coloured ocean. The spotted coral makes the sea look like it has monsters underneath the surface. Not a cloud in the beautiful sky. You can hear the purr of the boats zooming past.

    By Oliver Rm20

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  11. Sadness is a boring flat mountain with only a little bump.

    Death is a overpowering Mt Everest trying to throw you off.

    By Oliver Rm2

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